newlyweds visit a capsized ship
by Kate Choi
Real piece of work, he says, surveying the forty-five degree deck. Bad rigging, adds his wife knowingly from the other side of the wreck. Uh-huh, he says, squinting at the transom. He reaches out and begins scraping at it with his fingernails. He thinks, This is the rustiest shipwreck I’ve ever seen, and it’s one of the recent ones. He thinks, Jesus. They’re getting worse by the year. He manages to pick off a barnacle and rolls it between his fingers. Crusty and rough, it digs into the pad of his thumb. Irritated, he shakes it off into the water. No wonder, he remarks. This sucks. His wife, in the meantime, is still staring at the ship. That has got to be about five hundred windows, she says. Mhm, the husband agrees absently, picking at another barnacle. This one might be better, he thinks. The second one is always better. He peels it off the paint. It’s fresher, wiggles a little in his grip. Its shell is cracked, and he pries at the gap with one salted finger. The second one’s always better, he thinks. The third’s a gamble, though. He considers for a moment, then shakes his head. Yes, sometimes it was better to quit when you were ahead. Yep, his wife says. That’s five hundred windows alright. The husband finishes washing his hands off in the seawater. He doesn’t look up at the ship. Come on, he says to his wife. Let’s go home. His wife is still staring upward. What a waste of windows, she says. Don’t you think this is a waste of windows? Don’t be ridiculous, the husband says irritably. He grabs her shoulder and maneuvers them back to their yacht.
Kate Choi is a creative writer from Seoul, South Korea. An alumna of the Iowa Young Writers’ Studio, Kenyon Young Writers Workshop, and Adroit Summer Mentorship, her work is published or forthcoming in Rust & Moth, ONEART, The SHORE Poetry, and manywor(l)ds. Her work has been recognized by Polyphony Lit, Marginalia Poetry Contest, the NCTE Achievement Awards in Writing, Aster Lit, and more. She works as a poetry reader for Ploughshares, wildscape., and Twin Bird Review. You can find her online at katechoi.carrd.co.
